Wednesday 21 March 2012

The Rush

The adrenalin going through my body
George counting down 5, 4, 
Woody barking at me  
3, 2, 1
JUMP!
The cold chill through my body
I swim frantically towards 
The rocks 

                               
        By Kimberley  :)                                                                                                                  
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  1. Anonymous28 Jun 2012, 20:14:00

    Hi, Helena here.... (ex Karitane school pupil) What an amazing piece of writing! It's short but full of energy and creates a picture in my mind!
    I love writing to, check out my blog:
    Helenaballerina.blogspot.co.nz

    I'm also coming down in the holidays from Auckland soooo hope to visit the school!

    :)

    Helena Lunt

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